ZIKI’S DISTRESS #1 (SHORT STORY)

ZIKI’S DISTRESS #1 (SHORT STORY)

  • Posted by Edith Ohaja
  • On November 9, 2017
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This is a fictional story written in the first person case. The narrator is a young man by the name, Ziki. He shares his experience of co-habitation in a near explicit manner. By God’s grace, the story is entertaining and didactic. Enjoy!

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WHERE DO I GO FROM HERE?

March 4, 2017
I ran my hand down Yvette’s bare back while checking my phone. We had just made love and though I wasn’t eager for an encore, I needed to show some concern because she seemed troubled. Isn’t that what lovers do? Lovers, huh? Yeah, right!

She moved away from my touch. That’s a first! She even slipped on her gown and went to lean on her vanity dresser.

“Sweetheart, what IS the matter?”

“You know what the matter is. You don’t love me anymore.” Here we go again!

“I don’t love you? What have I been doing for the past half hour if not show you how much I love you?” I hated myself for that. The very words stank to me. But a guy’s gotta do what a guy’s gotta do.

“Come here!” That always worked. But not this time. She just stared at me.

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(Related: Broken Heart)
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“Tell me exactly what I’ve done wrong. Are you saying my touch doesn’t excite you anymore?”

“No, I’m saying you were a robot back there.”

“How so?”

“Do I have to spell it out to you? Your mind wasn’t in …. And it’s not the first time.” Oh boy! And I thought I was fooling her!

“Remember how you used to cuddle me after we’ve made love? Now, you can’t wait to turn and pick up your phone.”

“Oh, is that what this is about? You know my mum is sick. I wanted to see if there was an update from my brother about her condition.”

“Really? That is all you have been doing. Can we check your most recent chats to confirm that?”

“He#l, no!”

“I didn’t think so.”

“I mean, my word should be good enough for you, Yvette!”

“I’m afraid it isn’t. Hasn’t been for a long time, Ziki.”

“I swear I’m not cheating on you.”

“I really don’t care what you’re doing or not. This clearly isn’t working anymore. I want you out of here by nightfall.”

Never leave yourself at the mercy of others. Get some control over your life. #quote Click To Tweet

“You’re kicking me out? Just like that?”

“No, I’ll give you N500,000 to take care of yourself till you find your feet. Not that you deserve it, but I don’t want any bad karma pursuing me.”

I was speechless. This isn’t happening. After five years of living in this beautiful house, I am being thrown out. To go where? I’d met Yvette at a nightclub. She brought me home and I never left. I just picked my stuff from my brother’s house a few days later. In the first two weeks after I’d been there, I had tried looking for work, which was what brought me to Lagos in the first place. But nothing was forthcoming. Moreover, Yvette made it clear that “taking care of her” would serve me better than any job out there.

And she was right. She owned a travel agency and an industrial cleaning outfit. She employed over 50 persons and made loads of money. But she refused to consider hiring me in any capacity in her companies. “Never mix business with pleasure,” she had said, tickling my nose. Instead, she gave me a N100,000 monthly allowance. To sweeten the deal, she gave me exclusive use of the Lexus SUV she had just bought.

“Let’s be clear,” Yvette’s voice cut into my thoughts. “You don’t leave this house with anything except your clothes.”

“What?”

“You don’t think I’d give you my Lexus. I can give it to anybody else but you,” she added with a snort and left the room.

I swung my legs off the bed and cupped my face with my hands. So it has finally happened! Yvette and I had had similar conversations in the past but I’d always kissed her complaints away. But she must have been contemplating this for a long time. And if I know anything about her, nothing will change her mind now.

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(Related: My Beautiful Neighbour)
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I should have insisted on getting a job, getting my own place or even marrying her. I didn’t want a wife who drinks and smokes. How hypocritical! I mean, I probably drink and smoke more than her.

I didn’t even save the money she gave me. I doubt that I have up to N10,000 in my account. I spent the money on expensive clothes and outings with other chicks. And not one of them is in a position to take me in. They are either in school or living with their parents. How could I have been so stupid? And to think Yvette took care of everything else, including fuelling and maintaining the Lexus!

Money that is improperly earned usually ends up being improperly spent. #quote Click To Tweet

This couldn’t have happened at a worse time. I just finished blowing my last month’s allowance and my mum is sick.

Where do I go from here?

-To be continued-

Ⓒ Edith Ugochi Ohaja 2017

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Would love to hear from you.

How do you see Ziki and Yvette’s relationship and falling out?

Any advice for either or both of them?

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You can read the concluding part of this story here:

ZIKI’S DISTRESS #2 (SHORT STORY)

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144 Comments

Peter Michaels
Ah! To be continued ké? Mmm. Ok sha. For me, the relationship is nothing more that a transactional sex, which naturally would cloy after a while. I think it's unwise of Ziki not to have a backup plan, by being imprudent and reckless with other girls. He got what he bargained for...I mean. The girl only wants his loyalty and commitment, not even marriage! Ziki needs flogging.
    Edith Ohaja
    Lol, Peter! You wan read d whole tory sharp sharp, abi? I no sure backup plan dey too work for this kain thing. The relationship bad from beginning. Part Two loading ....
Henry
Waiting for the part two to be posted. I wanna read it ASAP. I have a friend who can relate totally to this story. Lol. Let me send him link sharperly
    Edith Ohaja
    Lol! Episode 2 will soon be posted. Bless you, Henry!
CHUKWU EBERE
Funny story but quite catchy. Things like this still go on in our society. Ziki wasn't smart to think of the future. Serves him right I must say, for living an immoral lifestyle.
    Edith Ohaja
    You know, some people think he could have done much with the money he got. But I insist that "Money that is improperly earned usually ends up being improperly spent." Ask the Nigerian policeman, esp the one collecting money from motorists. Have a great weekend!
Victor Igiri
Poor Ziki... The joy in Pleasure many a times bars one from thinking of the heartaches life could bring afterwards. Can't wait to continue where part 1 ended... Well done ma, and as always, Interesting story!
    Edith Ohaja
    Thanks a lot for visiting, Victor! Ziki thought he had it made. But the enjoyment needed to end for his eyes to open. Part 2 is coming soon. God bless you mightily in Jesus' name.
Ogbu Gloria
Ziki, Ziki! Truly, money that's not properly earned is not properly spent. God help Ziki! Am loving this story, lol.
Ugama Gloria Nkechinyere
This story is interesting, for her to have sent Zik out of her house, I think, is a good thing for him in disguise in the sense that he will learn how to be independent as a man instead of depending on a woman all through his life. Kudos MA!!
    Edith Ohaja
    Praise God! The journey to maturity and freedom is not always smooth but it's a journey everyone needs to take. You are favoured, Gloria!
Jonah Favour
A wonderful piece. Not all that glitters is gold. Vanity is vanity. Poor Ziki! What is going to happen to him afterwards. Can't wait.
    Edith Ohaja
    Love your anticipation. You won't be disappointed.
Emmanuel ujevwe
change is inevitable ziki should have been smarter to have invested or bought shares with the money he would have been richer.
    Edith Ohaja
    It's not easy to do anything meaningful with money we got in a wrong way. Easy come, easy go! Bless you, Emmanuel!
JayJay
Lol! I can't stop laughing. The Yvette just took a wise decision.imagine having a man that practically lives off you for the rest of your life.That's nauseating! The ziki guy tried to bite the fingers that fed him.I'll suggest he starts from the scratch. Begging her won't change anything right now.he needs to quit being a toddler and stand on his feet.he could start with hawking .Lol!!!
    Edith Ohaja
    Not a bad idea! He needs to be reminded of how rough life can be. He's been steeped in how the other half lives for too long. Lol! Seriously, no one should live on handouts, no matter how large, if they can help it.
Okafor nkemdilim isabel
Laziness and pleasure kills a man faster, I pity u ziki?
Eze,Nnenna
Ziki did not try at all. why will he choose to bite the finger that fed him? This shows he is an ingrate. Sha, I pray that he finds his feet on time before something terrible happens.
    Edith Ohaja
    My own question is: Why did he enter that kind of relationship in the first place? May God direct our steps to act in wisdom and live lives that honour Him daily in Jesus' name.
      Ogo Chijioke
      Ma'am the relationship is not the issue here. The issue is that the parties involved have no fear of God in them. Because I've read a story where even a prostitute got into a relationship with a Godfearing man and they ended up getting married and living happily ever after.
ISAAC NWANNEKA OYIRIDIYA
Ziki deserves what he got. Life is not a bed of roses.You do not have a job and u want to enjoy life, is not possible.
    Edith Ohaja
    He built a house of cards. But God found him to establish him on a rocky foundation foundation, Jesus.
Nathalie Ukwu
Moving in with his girlfriend and agreeing to live off an allowance from her was bad news from the start lol. Messing around on the other hand was entirely his choice. Glad she noticed his absence on time, what a wolf! I wish them the very best. #2
    Edith Ohaja
    What a wolf indeed! As a believer myself, I don't understand such relationships. They seem to me like huge gambles. Bless you, Nathalie!
Ogota Jennifer Adaeze
ziki has a dull brain. someone who claims to be ur girlfriend and unwilling to give u a job in her firm confirms a hidden agender.
Sylvia Ugwoke
Ziki took the right decision by not going back to Yvette. My advice to him is to remain in the right path which he has chosen
Ezenwa Chinaza
this piece is interesting as always, but Zik did not try. the pleasure of the moment stopped him from planning ahead.
Caius Precious Chinwendu
Lol. He should have saved some cash Atleast. But which reasonable man in his right senses agrees to such a deal? Well, that was his first mistake. Second, he made no investments. I wish him goodluck, though. Lol
Nwankwo Anita chinenye
Wow! I can't wait to see the second part of this story!!but its obvious that ziki was carried away because of the money yvette has and now he is full of regrets..what was he thinking?that yvette will keep taking responsibility financially? NO! a guy is suppose to work and make it on his own irrespective of how affluent his gf is...he made that mistake and he is in a big mess now...let's see how it goes.
Fidelis Favour Chiamaka
Ziki should have saved some of the money for rainy days and the fact that he is living with a woman ...... Hmmmm. I like your choice of words too. They're indirectly direct.
Aneke Modesta Chinemerem
Regret always comes at last but I believe that everything that happens in life,there's always a reason behind it, Zik is someone who doesn't think for himself as a man who has alot of responsibilities facing him because Yvette is always there to give him as much as he demands . But unfortunately there's none now, so is time to wake up from his slumber and find ways of getting money himself,and by so doing,he will learn how to minimize,manage and equally save the little he has.
Njoku Chioma Grace
i guess when your means of livelihood is something that comes on a platter of gold, you wont value it nor make an investment with it. Zik's relationship with Yvette was not sincere but then one can never buy fidelity nor love with money. as for Zik, he is a guy who though has responsibilities, lacks vision and direction in life. just cant wait to see what becomes of him. sure hope he comes up with something that will keep him from totally falling.
maduebo ifunanya blessing
zik has a dull brain, but my advice to him is to stay on right path which he has chosen. nice one ma'am
onoh chiazo johanness
he acted impulsively see where it landed him, 5 years gone and nothing to show for it. the world is not a bed of roses.
ohakwe oluchi judith
when a man lack vision or focus in life, that is when he begins to act and live like Zik, i'm glad things turned out this way because he cannot eat his cake and have it back.
Awoke Isaiah Kelechi
people should be real in choosing friends, just like the adage that says one should be friends with people that they are compatible with, as he or she may turn out to be one's life partner.
Nonike Victoria N.
zikkkiiii!!! its quite unfortunate he is in this position, cant wait to read part two!
Ani Chiamaka Theresa
Lol....ziki is a lazy being....there are men out there in the society lyk him.....perhaps he will learn his lesson thereafter and strive lyk a man instead of depending on a lady for everything......pple should always know that they can't reap where they did not sow and there is no food for a lazy man too.
Ibe Okwukwe Emmanuella
Guys would always be guys,low mentality and immaturity. They say, "you don't know what you've got until you lose it."
UGWU, CHINAGOROM JOSEPH
Ziki's stupidity is the height of it. How can he be housed by a lady yet he was looking outside. It is disappointing and improper. But the lady is strong-willed. To throw out someone almost immediately after their affair shows she is strong and strict. Ziki could not save because he was getting money easily and improperly. He should have thought of establishing himself first.
onyeabor ijeoma Rita
i wonder if i can do what Yvette did by taking in a man, cloth him, feed him and also pay him. all the same, we dont know what we got until we lose it. ziki has lost it all, he has to start life all over again. but its also true that we dont know what we've been missing until it arrives, ziki has to stand on his feet and be a man. Yvette did the right thing by sending him out, it will enable him to be more calculative instead of being extravagant and chasing after girls like flies. it will also make him more responsible by going into the labour market and making himself useful to his parents, siblings and society at large.
udeh bessing
With this outcome, the right thought will soon come into ziki's head.
Onwuania adaora
It is obvious that Ziki does not love Yvette. He was after her money when he came to Lagos and had no job or money.
ifeoma mordi
This is no kind of love relationship a responsible person should indulge him/herself in at all. Money can't buy love.all the money and luxury Yvette had couldn't buy ziki and mk him faithful to her.
Edeh cynthia oluomachi
Ziki knowing that he has a lot of responsibilities should have avoided being lazy and worked hard to meet his responsibilities, instead of depending on a woman to feed and accommodate him. Relationships should not center on sex. I believe they have more to offer than just sleeping with each other. And it is so clear that Ziki does not love Yvette at all, but maybe she feels since she has the money that she can also have Ziki to herself.
UGWUOTA DELISE PHILOMENA
Very touching you know, but some men are very ..., he thinks he can eat his cake and have it ooo! no, no matter how one pretends to be in love, one day it will still show that you dont love that person and you are in because of the money,only then will you be lost in your illusion of thought. Gone are those days when men think that they are more superior and hard working than us, they always have this feeling that they are the only ones that can go to the battle field (labour market) and succeed. lol! this serves him right. i can imagine how tears were coming out from his eyes. the fact still remains that he cast all his hope on a woman that is working and decided not to work to help himself, family, friends and loved ones. Men beware of being thrown out by a woman, when she's fed up with your lies, womanizing and you being a burden. it could happen to anyone that chooses to be like him. with this please, step the step and dont forget the step. one big kiss(mua!) for the lady of the house!
Jeremiah Chioma Juilet
Ziki just three words for you...YOU DESERVE IT!
Opara Stella Chidindu
Serves him right! you can not eat your cake and have it, neither can you bite the finger that feeds you. He is just a disgrace for a man. I hope he gets a life and stops living on the expense of a woman. As for Yvette, she should have seen this coming a long time ago. It was high time she called it quits.
Ezenwa Obinna G.
Poor Ziki. He should have understood that he was playing a one-sided game and thus have every tendency to fail and land him in his most dreaded situation in life. If I were to ask, I might inquire whether Ziki's brain was eaten by some kind of carnivore that he found solace in the care of a woman who is not his wife? I wonder.
ugwublessingchinenye
zik is not making use of his brain. He deserves what he is facing now
Egwuonwu Priscilla
Karma has taken its course. Ziki is the kind of man our parents warn us against. It's obvious he's a cheat but to an extent I feel pity for him because it seems he did it to survive and he feels the ever present pang of guilt. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Ndubuisi Uchenna
Looks like it game over for Ziki
Mokogwu Josephine
What a shock! Poor ziki, what is he going to do now? anyway, money isn't everything in life.
Ene Esther
I read the part two before reading this one and I’d say quite frankly he deserved what he got. He didn’t contribute anything to the relationship except his presence and yet he bit the finger that fed him.
Oleru Precious
I see Ziki as an irresponsible and lazy man. He would have still looked for a job even if he was living with Yvette. What happened to Ziki is what happens to people who like living at the mercy of others.
Luke chinyere
From the start, the relationship wasn't built on genuine love the kind that helps one become better but I'm glad it's falling apart for them. For Yvette, probably she's tired of the whole unhealthy and lustful kind of relationship. Only a sequence to this story would tell. Nice job ma'am.
ALEGU SOLOMON CHIDI
It is always advisable for boys and girls to go into what i called "purposeful relationship" and not in a "wandering relationship". Ziki thought everything will end in exactly the same way it started but unfortunately for him, reverse becomes the case.My advice to Ziki is that, he should try and utilise the fifty thousand naira that Yvette has promised to give him even as he moves out of her house.
Nweke Jemimah Chisom
one thing is that money gotten easily goes easily. he even thought he could keep playing with his 'madam'. the earlier he decides to do something better for himself, there are bound to be crises in his life.
Kat
Can't say i feel too sorry for Ziki at this point. This was a long way coming. I mean, you have to reap what you sow right? He didn't really apply wisdom to his dealings with Yvette and he's paying for it now. A beautiful first part ma'am #smiles#
Unwana Ekere
Let me rush to part 2.. Some Days are like that. Ziki was caught in the net,i wonder why he wasn't just faithful after all she did. One day for the owner tho.. Men like Ziki deserves to be thrown out but Love can still cover it up. The part two determines because i can't even predict the story. God bless you ma'am for always giving us glue to what's happening in this contemporary age!
OKEKE CHINONYE
Yvette and Ziki's kind of relationship is something one would consider heading for the rocks. If Ziki loves her, he would have definitely opted for marriage
ogbobi blessing ojonoma
Ziki behavior in this stage shows his irresponsibility, no matter the kind of comfort u enjoy you in place, u should learn to fend for yourself... Learn not to depend on human all the time... Kudos ma!
Abugu Chinazom
I feel for Ziki! He's really in distress, I hope he finds a solution to the mess he's into. But a wise person, who lives in our world of today, should have known that luxuries, especially the ones not worked hard for, don't last. If Ziki was wise enough to have been saving up to 50% of his monthly allowance for the rainy day, he wouldn't have been in as much mess as he is in, right now.
Ikwuakam Oluchi
Wow,nice one ma.I believe this relationship couldn't have been any better considering that Ziki does not really love Yvette, he only pretends to be in love with her cos of her wealth and that does not form the right foundation for any successful relationship.
ABONYI CHISOM. E.
Their relationship was not built on love, rather on money. Ziki did not work so hard to get the money that was given to him he Spent it recklessly. Yvette was not getting the love she paid for, wanted to put an end to it.this is called trade by barter relationship..#smiles.. Nice story
Agada chinenyenwa Lucy
Wow,nice one ma ,I believed the relationship between ziki and Yvette was not encouraging because there is no true love between them whereby ziki is cheating on Yvette regardless of Yvette wealth been lavished on him
Iroegbu Chinatu Amara
For one, I really don't understand why a guy would be comfortable living off a lady. Well I think he should have seen that coming.
Akuma Victor
To start with, i don't think Yvette is a lady one should end up with, she's just one fellow that needs someone to spend money on and get self-satisfaction in return, it's actually a good news that she asked Ziki out of her house so that he can make meaning out of his living. At the same time I blame Ziki for his stupidity, had he saved up some cash, he wouldn't have been on the fence on the next action to take.
Ezeorah Cynthia Somtochukwu
Ziki and Yvette are mature enough to know what they got themselves into. It's just funny that ziki wasn't mature enough to do something sensible with the earnings he got so easily. I guess after enjoying the luxuries for the first three years, he didn't think it will come to an end.
Ifebunandu Angela Chimerie
Poor ziki...it never even occurred to him to save or find something Worthwhile to do with his life I wish him the best shaa Can't wait for part 2
Onyibalu kosisochukwu Maureen
Their relationship was not based on love rather on pleasure and I'm glad Yvette kicked ziki out,who knows it might actually be for the best.
Ezeh onyekachukwu christiantus
Money cannot buy love.this story teaches lots of lessons to teenagers. Am really sorry for ziki because he never saw this coming..relationships should be based on love and not money or pleasure.
ogochukwupeter234140unn
Financial independence and is very essential for every individual, Ziki failed to realise that and he met his waterloo.
Chukwuneke Blessing
Financial independence is very essential for every individual, Ziki failed to realise that and he met his Waterloo.
Okemiri Ifunanya Diana
Ziki is just too careless and lazy in terms of saving because I don't understand how someone without an occupation will be mis-use money he didn't suffer for and expect the person giving him to continue to give him,man pls go get a work.
Amana Sharon Umola
How ungrateful and irresponsible people can be. A man depending on a woman's income and not doing anything and yet cheats on her is a great height of irresponsibility. Ma, thank you for this amazing work.
Kalu Divine Ogechi
Ziki made a grave mistake by cheating on Yvette though she just wanted him for pleasure. People shouldn't be so insensitive towards what is happening around them,ziki did not consider Yvette's emotion in the whole affair.
Ene Kosisochukwu Zita
I think Ziki is a confusionist. Accepting to come into Yvette's house means you pledging allegiance to her. How can you be in a girl's house and still be playing hanky panky? It does not work that way. You can't eat your cake and have it. It's either he plays by the rule or gets kicked out and that's just the decision Yvette has taken.
Vanessa Ezenwafor
I'm glad Yvette finally came to her senses and sent him out, though she should have given him the chance to find something to do By that, she would have taught him how to fish and not always feed him fish
Nnadi Daniel
Wow this is really a tempting life to live, but my advice to any man is that he should not live of any woman without any back up or let me say a earned living. Interesting story by the way mrs ohaja.
Vanessa Ezenwafor
Yvette finally came to her senses by sending him out. but she should have given him time to do so. Also, she would have let him start up something and with that, she would have taught him how to fish instead of feeding him fishes always
Levi ifeanyi
Some people don't value what they have until they loss them. Just like the quote "money that is improperly earned usually ends up being improperly spent." God bless ma.
Chekuzo veronica
Ziki should have know that relationship s like theirs would not last for so long given the circumstances which they met.he wasn't even at least faithdull to her serve a guy like him right.
Chidinma Obasi
Nice piece, ma. Ziki in as much as he played a high level of irresponsibility towards Yvette, but for Yvette to ask him to leave her house was actually God's divine plan for his encounter with Jesus ... For a thousand years is like a day before God Almighty.
Asogwa Emmanuel C
Hmmn! Trust Warri guys dem no dey carry last for dis kin matter. Ziki forgot the proverb that says, ' make hay while the sun shines'. Suffice to say that ziki never had an ambition for his life living on someone's hard earned fortune without a single investment for five years. Brother ziki welcome to the league of Brokers
Afiadigwe Nnedinso Rita
An interesting story again.Misunderstanding often happen in our family but it is easily resolved when we understand each other. God bless ma.
Chidera
Ziki taught that it would be like that for a long period of time but failed to think of his future since he couldn't marry a girl that smokes. Waiting for #2
Chukwuma Chekwube jennifer
Most things that happen in our lives happen for a reason.
Amaobi Precious
Well, he was wrong and she proved that to him. A guy without any vision, that's what he is. Else, how can we explain him staying in a Lady's house for months, depending on her money and lavishing it. It shows how goalless he is. My advice to him? He'd better leave that house by nightfall or he won't like what he sees. Its time to hustle, Ziki. Its a cool story, Ma. Heading on to part 2 to know how Ziki survived.
Ibe Chinwe Cynthia
At a very tender age I was taught the art of saving. In times of need when financial issues arise, one's savings would be there to help. Unfortunately, Ziki never saw things from that view point. If he found it diffiult to save parts of his monthly allowance, what would 500,000 do for him in the long run? I'd sit back, relax and watch things unfold.
Peace onoja
Ziki what were you expecting. You think you can live with a woman fully without even investing or contributing any reasonable thing in her life and expect her to keep loving and respecting you? Impossible! Life my dear is not a bed of roses and even if it were remember, roses have thorns too. # men take note.
Akogu Juliet Aniema
Na wa oooo...ziki is really something else...how can someone be getting such money and yet not have any savings at all...its unfortunate. Now let's see what happens next...I don't even pity him...he deserves to leave that house.
Afiadigwe Nnedinso Rita
The story is really educative because it helps us understand that it gets ugly before it becomes beautiful.When Ziki discovered that his girlfriend was not going to help him again, he decided to hustle and eventually he made it.May God help us.
ugwuaneke Grace U.
No be small thing,well i do not encourage what Ziki and his mistress are doing,but Ziki must have learnt how to plan for tomorrow.
Joseph Edidiong
WOW! we get to that point in our lives when we have to be honest with ourselves and spell out what's working and what's not. i guess Ziki deserved such treatment. what a man! beautiful story and an educative one for all. thank you ma.
Ibute kosisochukwu nina
Lol... Can't laugh alone... But y will Zik have a mistress... Dats not good nah... Can't even wait for part 2
Onwuka Chinaecherem Emmanuel
Ziki indeed never planned his life, he should have himself to blame not Yvette whose only looking out for her man (ziki). A man that truly has dignity will never stay jobless like ziki no matter the offer. Just like in the movies; this story indeed can make a blockbuster; made use of good choice of words to create a mental picture while reading.
Josiah Judith Enobong
No one is to blame but ziki; truly he has no plan for himself, he was carried away by luxury, he now became the woman in the relationship not the other way round. And to add to that, he decided to flirt around with girls spending all his earnings simply because he doesn't work for it. Now nemesis have caught him.
ISRAEL CHINWE GOODNESS
i read this wonderful piece long ago but in a hurry to see the concluding part i forgot to leave my comment. Yvette just took the right decision. imagine if they had eventually gotten married which i believe Ziki would have done just because of her money. thank God they just saved each other future heartbreak and divorce. And i believe Ziki can now start being a man that he is.
Agi Comfort Obahi
With all that money given to Ziki he ought have been saving up even for the fact that he is a man ..Yvette took the right decision I believe things will get well with Ziki ..nice story ma
Onyeka pamela chiamaka
I think yvettte is right no matter how good u treat most guys they always cheat on u. He shud go out dere and face d world.
EKWUEME VICTOR OBIORA
imagine #500000 to be given to Ziki in order to avoid or bribe bad karma,Yvette made that very clear for ziki to understand that he does not value her again since he has achieved his aim. which kind of relationship is that? betraying someone that loves you. well let me not side this judgment until the second episode is published. ma am waiting ...
RACHAEL OBIORA
ziki thought he was smart. but how can he depend on a woman's money that's too bad. he is a grown up man and should go and look for something doing. he should go and be a man and not wait for a woman. i like the way Yvette sent him away so he can know that nothing is easy. imagine cheating on her even when she is paying him. Ah! Ziki you can't eat your cake and have it now.
osuagwuchiamaka
Hmmm... there are a lot of young men who rely on rich ladies, rather that standing on their feet. men like this don't have foresight, they only live for the moment.
Oweka Chioma Sandra
Nawa for Ziki ooo. It's bad enough that he's living off his girlfriend, but why can't he keep it in his pants? Shebi she has sent him off with nothing, he will smell Cameroon pepper.
Uwaegbuonu Precious
He didnt even think of saving up some money, maybe he felt his pocket will never run dry... Hahahahah what a pity! we ladies should as well wisen up and never be a victim of such... we should be wise: Relationship should not be based on money rather love
Chika Divine Umunnakwe
The story is interesting and has suspense that I kept me eager to see what happens next? The use of simple language and the pace is well constructed. The dialogue well employed in the story. Ziki and Yvette's relationship is not solid; is lust and greed. Such relationship will certainly fall out. When there is no trust nor understanding just for the present fun and not for the future purpose. The relationship will fall out and can't be a surprise. Both of them should quit such relationship. If each of them see reasons to build the relationship for the future then they need to pray together, seek counsel and come back to humility, communication, trust and love not lust/greed.
Anyadubalu Oluchi Maryrose
Nigerian guys shaa, always looking for where to eat and go scot free. I still thank God that Yvette was loving him with her brain along, Zik felt he was the one fooling her and so he felt it was all about money. I am just glad she took that decision of kicking him out. Well. I dont know what there relationship is turning into but whatever i would advice Yvette to play wise because he has just shown her what can do .
Stephen Rosemary Ibibo
I think the relationship couldn't have been any better considering that Ziki does not really love Yvette, he only pretends to be in love with her because she is wealthy, its a very wonderful story Ma
onyema bright
ziki deserves every single treatment melted on him by Yvette .you can't eat your cake and have it he tried playing a hankypanky(hide and see)game with ziki's heart but i guess karma caught up with him this is an example to men who are still cheating on their partner one dayb you might just face the sing song ziki is facing.....
chidera odo
Some people are just myopic to see that such things don't last forever. You get 100k from a girl who is not your wife, boss in the office u do no work for her and u think it Goan last forever. You don't buy food, u don't fuel the car, u don't just have a need thing tangible to do with the money.. A lady is doing all these and you still have the mind to cheat on her... Not even a single investment nor savings... To be rich is not for everybody self.
onuoha diana
it has always amazed me how money gotten irresponsibly never last long and is often used for folly. i think this is a wake up call for zik: get your lazy a#s up and start a job. he has an ailing mother and all he does is sit and be a gigolo. this story is more than the average story, this is a mandate for young people to stop seeing their bodies as their goldmine and focus more on their brain power and skills. according to proverbs, seeth thou a man who is diligent in his business, he shall stand before kings not mere men.
Covenant
It's funny how people behave Sha. You stay in a relationship because of wealth. At the end of the day you didn't save up anything. Atleast most people do this kind of things with there brain. Thank God she kicked him out.
izukah chinonso favour
From the on set ziki should have known that the relationship wasnt going to last considering how they met and what the relationship itself looks like. he should have stood his ground and achieve the main reason why he came to lagos. it is only a person that is less of a man that will be comfortable enjoying a woman spend on him
Anigbo Chisom anastesia
Not every woman is a fool and not all women can be fooled with sex...zik was really crazy by thinking dat d love you say you have for a woman can be shown using sex....and where on earth is it advisable for a man not to have savings upon his parasitic nature on a woman?
Maduabuchi Ebube Deborah
Kikikikikikikiki....lol....please I know I am allowed to laugh..... Ziki pls what exactly are u planning with your life, seriously I won't blame Yvette because using what you said,you are not someone suitable for her ....is even better you are been chased out at least it will make you to hustle like a real man and not sticking with a lady who feeds you everyday, haba ziki........well let me know what you will do next, I just hope this situation you are now will make you to be useful
Joana Ushie
Ziki is just stupid and foolish. How would a mature man wait for a woman to clothe and feed him, thank God she finally chased him. Stupid man
Ekeh chioma Jennifer
See me dey enjoy story come see to be continued* /crying/ make I rush go read the second one jare.....Zik!!! You're a tom boy. You allow you self to be used because of material stuff. woe to you. You need deliverance biko. Ma please second part....
Okereafor, Cynthia Uchechi
Yvette is an Enigma; While She orders Ziki out of her apartment, She is giving him money to escape Karma. Well, She has strong reasons. No woman enjoys A cheating partner. Ziki should learn his lessons and amend his life.
Rahman Peace Taiye
I wonder why a full grown man will decide to live off a woman. It doesn't say much for his character. It shows that he is not responsible. Hmm... Anyway, let's see what happens to Ziki now.
Catherine Ndukwe
Surely one can not eat ones cake and have it. Ziki doesn't take yvette to be dumb, imagine a lady that practically takes care of your material needs and you still cheat on her. That's because he doesn't love her and ziki also forget that yvette is like her money bag. He was foolish through out the relationship since knowing fully well that he doesn't have a future with her, he never deemed it fit to save for the rainy days.
Ike Ruby Olachi
Well I think that ziki is not serious in life, doesn't have any purpose and should be very ashamed of himself. He is not man enough and should stand up and be a man
Sunday Francis C
The downfall of a man doesn't determine the end of his life. U might have been single lots from a woman but when she throws u out, it doesn't mean u can never raise up again. Though Zik have not been doing the right hing by living and depending on a woman for his needs just because they are dating but I believe that in the subsequent episodes, things will surly turn out well for him but if he retrace his steps and stand up to be a man.
ezeagbo ifebuche juliet
waw! cant wait for the next episode. seriously, this is really educating. Ziki did not make good use of his opportunity. had it been he has be saving those monthly allowance that Yvette was giving to him, he can handle the situation that came to him.
Attamahchidiogogeorginah
To fool people is not always good because karma exists it can heat you back when you least expected
    Edith Ohaja
    Hmmm, this karma thing sef. It's not in my Bible oh!
onyema bright
lolz ziki got what he deserve .i expected Yvette to have chased him out much more earlier than she did you can't eat your cake and have it.ziki took Yvette to be a fool and desrvedly he got punished for it.kudos to Yvette for setting a standard for all ladies to follow!!!
ijeoma okoroafor
OMG, no savings ? ziki why ? guys don't know what they have till they loose it.
Udeh favour makuachukwu
OMG. This story is just so realistic. I love it. Some guys are just gold diggers. Good for him.
Eze Valentine Chibuike
LOL. Tom-tom relationship can be sweet in the beginning but will get bitter later on. Ziki shouldn't start blaming himself for moving in in the first place. Luxury offerings in time of desperation is completely enticing. His mumu began when he was blowing away all the cash on irrelevances sha. Landlady has spoken her mind so Ziki should obey like that. But nawa o, wetin money fit do person ehnn..
itodo mary
After staying in a relationship because of material things, Ziki still has nothing to show for it. it's a loss loss for him though
Ikebuaku Ezinwanne K
I'm so amazed ! I use to wonder the reason why people go into this kind of relationship but I'm seeing Ziki's reason here but even at that it is not justifiable at all. Ziki being a young man should have gone for something far honourable than this instead.Sincerely,I'm dissapointed by his way of life.
Ogbodo somtochukwu ikemefuna
I totally understand ziki and his reason 4 going and being in dz kind of relationship. ..Sister, man must survive oo Bt d guy no sharp...u know u wud not marry her and yet u no get back up plan.. .Aaaaah.na f##k up naaa He should jux look 4 d girl sweet point and play a better game... Maybe it's will work and dn, plan B follows immediatly... Dnt mind me Ooooooo...
uzoma chidera
Ahhh...for a woman to cater for a jobless man's needs and his still not giving her what she wants Nawa o...to me I feel a man is meant to be working and the woman should be in the house or instead she should be working....this ziki guy is sha funny oo, he is not even contented...can't wait to read the part 2
obidigbo ifunanya Nino
Hahaha, this post got me laughing what some women can do for men, its surprising can't wait to read the part two, kudos ma on the post.
onu victor tochukwu
Love can not be feigned, whoever loves you will keep you even when he is tempted outside. I wouldn't call it love because Ziki is just their for Yvette's money. Which made him spend carelessly because gotten without work is spent carelessly.

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